Wyatt's blog was about an app called Writers Hat. He talks about what it does and why they are using it. He has a pretty good vocabulary, but he didn't edit his post before he submitted it. That is a lesson he has should take a lot from. Editing is the most important thing to consider when writing a post.
It is clear that Paris really likes horses. Her post was about a chestnut horse named Jester. She has excellent grammar and her post has clearly been edited prior to her posting to her blog. If she keeps going like this, she will be a great English student.
Both of these students had good content on their blogs. Even though they are various topics, it is easy to read and each post has meaning. A lot of blogs, especially from younger students tend to contain things like: "Today I ran." And that to me is harder to comment on.